Come again another day/comments?

I like the imagery of your piece, there are a few grammatical errors but overall its not a bad start, I think it would help if you were a bit clearer, the focus of your piece is a little uncertain as you seem to talk about a number of different issues. Overall I rather enjoyed the line "the truth that made you a baby once again" I hope that helps and don't stop writing poetry is such a great creative outlet that lets people bare their soul, it doesn't necessarily have to rhyme it just has to come from some place real.